prolix

Writing a book to describe something you could describe in a sentance.

Prolix: She felt her heart pounding in great effort from which she could not describe how it was dragging along without harmony. It was as if the world had turned the tide and suddenly, it began to expand and burst out of her chest with a immeasurable amount of pressure.

Without Prolix: Her heart exploded.

by Amy October 7, 2006