Hey
Wendy
Just finished my
work
I'd like to stay in if that's okay with you. Its been an arduous week.
You are more than welcome to join, I'
m sure there's some wine, cheese and dark
chocolate left in the pantry.
The breakdown:
^I'm going for the kill.
Hey
wendy - that's me being direct
"finished my work" - implies I have a career.
"..to stay in" - lets her know I'm in charge of this transaction*.
" arduous" - I'm also smart.
"..left in the.." - to imply this is my normal lifestyle to add hints of sophistication, experience and class.
All that put together as concisely as possible adds the last dimension: the smash**.
* "Transaction" - #Zavage
** "....the smash" - #Zavage
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